Clinton Tan – Exercise 3.1

4 Comments

1. Aldo Estrada says:

   October 5, 2009 at 2:14 pm

   Clinton,
   I think the gray margen and the quote in the middle work well together. But I would have to add that aligning the edges will make it look even sharper.
   Well done.
2. khelgeson says:

   October 5, 2009 at 2:56 pm

   I like the placement of the three gray bars, whose varying shades are pleasing to the eye. The different colors, sizes, and fonts of text add further distinction to each bar and the function it represents. The paragraphs themselves are clearly spaced, simple, and approachable; however, the inconsistent alignment is somewhat irksome, as I do not fully understand its purpose.
3. hjomehri says:

   October 5, 2009 at 9:29 pm

   I like how you designed the title to the left and rotated it, and think the composition works nicely. I agree about the alignment of the actual text, and think this page would be flawless if the alignment was consistent throughout. Good job!
4. wleung says:

   October 6, 2009 at 7:34 am

   The use of color and the highlight of the quote look very nice to me. I would suggest you to align the text. Now, they kinda make me want to push them to the left. But very nice job on the layout.