Clinton Tan – Exercise 4.1

2 Comments

1. rking says:

   October 8, 2009 at 9:41 am

   All are very good: very simple and easy to look at.
   #1 – “architecture” is too light – maybe it decends one character to far?

   #2 – “architecture” again is too light and the “a” is fighting with the dark line (and losing).

   #3 – “architecture” is darker but now it looks crunched vertically. It’s now fighting agressively with the lines. “clinton tan” needs more room under the box.

   I like them.
2. kking says:

   October 12, 2009 at 1:47 pm

   I like the third one the best, because of the abstract curves, and how “Clinton Tan” and “architecture” are hanging out past the main grid