Rosemary McGowan Exercise 4.1

4 Comments

1. Clarissa says:

   October 7, 2009 at 5:06 pm

   Hey Rosemary,
   The pieces in your compostions keep the eye moving; that’s what i like about your logos. The colors go well together. Nice work!
2. felipe23 says:

   October 7, 2009 at 8:06 pm

   The use of circles and triangles make a nice composition. Name along the curvy line flows as well. The rectangles supply the backgroung and the front. Colors absorbed clarity and visual sense.
3. rking says:

   October 7, 2009 at 10:53 pm

   #1 – This is the best but it looks like your name is Rosemaru rather then Rosemary. The decender in the “y” is gone. I think the verticals in the background could use more contrast. The right side seems much “heavier” then the left. Perhaps you might crop some of the left side?

   #2 – Still good but the placement seems more haphazard.

   #3 – The text doesn’t standout. Is there some text at the bottom? I can’t read it.
4. ctan says:

   October 8, 2009 at 2:39 am

   I like how the shapes create an artsy look and may convey the different tools used by architects in their work, such as trianges, protractors, and a cleaning brush (the S-shaped object). It allows the viewer to look for different things in the trademark. The use of contrasting colors is also good.