i really like the directionality that the first image creates. You’ve rendered it very nicely with the arrows. The second one has a really nice quality to its line weights; how it is thicker on the edges and thinner in the middle. Color could possibly improve the second one.
krogers
I feel that your first diagram is particularly effective in capturing the most important element of the photo, direction. The second diagram has excellent accuracy and mimics the pattern of the photo nicely.
asakaida
The first image is strongly effective to show what you imagine. Good job!:)
This is lovely. The brush work on the second image is great, and the first is very informative
This looks great and the use of the arrows really works well.
i really like the directionality that the first image creates. You’ve rendered it very nicely with the arrows. The second one has a really nice quality to its line weights; how it is thicker on the edges and thinner in the middle. Color could possibly improve the second one.
I feel that your first diagram is particularly effective in capturing the most important element of the photo, direction. The second diagram has excellent accuracy and mimics the pattern of the photo nicely.
The first image is strongly effective to show what you imagine. Good job!:)