Exercise 111 Silvia Hoessl

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  1. I love the idea of using that skyline picture in the background. It adds something different that isn’t just a solid color. All in all, it looks great!

  2. I really like the concept. I think the background works perfectly. The text would look more organized if it was in boxes like you did with the title. Great job!

  3. I really like the concept, layout, and the colors you used. Two things I noticed that could enhance the overall appeal would be to have DVC and the other green text block in front of the background image and not transparent. Also adjust the text so as to not have hyphenation and make the margins even in the columns. This would make a fine postcard for the program!

  4. I love the city view in the background and how DVC and the subtitle pop in the contrasting green vs gray. I would say that an outline for your words would make them much easier to read and some of the letters get lost in the buildings.

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