Exercise 114- ID Portfolio_ Jacob Avery

By javery911

I am a small-scale commercial beekeeper and I currently study sustainable architecture at DVC.

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  1. I really like the photo composition and the use of intentional overlap. The bottom text block is well done also! The only comment I would make is the text with the outline comes off a little hard to read and it blends into the background photos maybe add an independent text block for your descriptions or find a way to make it less competitive for visual focus.

  2. I love how you’re being really descriptive about your images, and also stating the places where you took the pictures.
    One suggestion though: try making the page numbers a bit smaller.

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