Share this:FacebookTwitterEmailGooglePinterestLinkedInExercise_114_Leal,JosephExercise 114 – Young Joon NaBy javery911I am a small-scale commercial beekeeper and I currently study sustainable architecture at DVC. Comments (3) andspen March 5, 2015 at 7:03 pm This could go for a Hiking magazine, very nice spread. Tyler Mourelatos March 9, 2015 at 7:03 am I really like the photo composition and the use of intentional overlap. The bottom text block is well done also! The only comment I would make is the text with the outline comes off a little hard to read and it blends into the background photos maybe add an independent text block for your descriptions or find a way to make it less competitive for visual focus. leticialopez March 9, 2015 at 9:13 am I love how you’re being really descriptive about your images, and also stating the places where you took the pictures. One suggestion though: try making the page numbers a bit smaller. Pingbacks list Submit a comment... (Minimum 25 characters) Cancel reply This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.