Exercise 127- Phoebe

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  1. interesting cover! I like how you covered parts of the building, only giving us a glimpse of what to expect on the inside. Good job!

  2. I like the use of the monochrome colors you chose as well as how you made the title red so that it stood out better against the darker colors, great job!

  3. I like the sense of movement in this cover’s composition! You did a nice job making the title pop out with the bright red against a monochromatic background.

  4. I like how you have many different parts that make up your cover yet it seems fairly simple.

  5. Phoebe,

    I am seeing a lot going on here in this cover. This is a lot to take in at once. I think that we should draw back some of the elements being used here so that we are either cleanly showing off that awesome architecture or we are showing some cool triangular shapes that are all solid colors. That is just my two cents.

    Also, I keep saying this to everyone but that font has got to go, I have seen it on 50% of all portfolios that come out of this class! Lets look for something unique that really speaks to your personality, and a font that nobody can recreate.

  6. Interesting use of diagonals and triangles, maybe its a little too much to have together as the languages can compete rather than compliment one another.

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