Share this:FacebookTwitterEmailPinterestLinkedInExercise 228-Yanhui LuEXERCISE 126 – KEBEI CHEN Comments (9) Gracia Kusnadi May 15, 2019 at 12:23 pm I really like your rendering, it looks really clean and cool jporter May 15, 2019 at 1:05 pm The section gives a good representation of how the circulation between the indoor and outdoor spaces flows. You might want to consider moving the kitchen table light closer to the ceiling to better light the large space. Nicely done on the section drawing too. Kelly Campos May 15, 2019 at 2:03 pm I think the line drawing needs a little more work in terms of lineweights. Make the objects like chairs thinner? Just a suggestions although it is well done. I love the clay rendering. Penny May 17, 2019 at 11:43 pm The section drawing looks really neat and clean. I love the clay rendering and shadow you put on it. cquirante May 18, 2019 at 11:54 am Good job on the section drawing. I like the clay rendering and it looks very clean. apukarta560 May 18, 2019 at 5:21 pm Nice angeled roof ! I can see it from the section cut you made! j.alvarez May 19, 2019 at 1:16 pm very clean, looks awesome and its easy to ready siuyanwong May 19, 2019 at 8:59 pm I really like this section drawing which looks so neat and detail. The light, window, furniture, and stairs you put make this drawing much interesting. What a great job! tneff May 22, 2019 at 5:16 pm It looks very simple but also incredibly cozy at the same time. Pingbacks list Submit a comment... (Minimum 25 characters) Cancel reply This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.