135 portfolioD Share this:FacebookTwitterEmailPinterestLinkedInExercise 129Exercise 129 -Chelsea Moreyra Comments (4) Zuza May 12, 2020 at 2:24 pm Hello KeYing, Overall, I think your portfolio is nice, however, it feels vague, is there a way you can integrate talking about the programs and materials you used in all of your pieces. Another detail that I found confusing is the labeling of your ‘Yosemite Cabin I and II’, they almost feel like two different projects. Is there a way to make them feel similar? maybe by keeping a black and white theme. Additionally, I didn’t feel an overall theme in your portfolio, the only feature that connected all of your pieces together is the number and the fonts. In conclusion, I think you have some great pieces, but they feel scattered and small, especially on the two tabloid pages and both those attributes contribute to a messy portfolio to follow. I know that you’re early, so I want to give you my thoughts. Hopefully, this helps. Loading... r.arens May 17, 2020 at 1:04 am your layout is really well done! eye-catching and would be really successful as a print Loading... n.muhs May 18, 2020 at 9:14 am I think your layout is really great. I think the fonts fit well and I like that the text stays in the background so that the viewer can concentrate on your work. Loading... kao May 18, 2020 at 10:56 pm I really like your overall design for the portfolio. It also very well organized. well done Loading... Pingbacks list Join the discussion, leave a reply! Cancel comment Comment Name Email Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.