I like your use of color and the shapes. At first I thought there was too much space between the paragraphs but I think with the shapes it’s well balanced visually.
annacsoto
I really like you design!!! The way you place the circles and the title works well. The only thing I would comment on is that the size of the font is too small leaving a lot of space between the paragraphs.
I like your title as well as the use of the circles, I would say trying another font or changing the size as other people have commented.
jleyto
Just as the others said, the circles are great. Its a nice blue which is very pleasing to the eye. And the transparency of the circles over the text is really nice also.
nmobley
Interesting set up of your layout, the juxtaposition of the circles from largest to smallest on the left (and faded to allow the text to jump to the front), to the smallest to largest on the right. Good choice in color as I think it really works for this layout, one comment would be to keep the two blocks on the side (the black bars with the white text) the same color. Outside of that, this is a very successful layout!
I like your use of color and the shapes. At first I thought there was too much space between the paragraphs but I think with the shapes it’s well balanced visually.
I really like you design!!! The way you place the circles and the title works well. The only thing I would comment on is that the size of the font is too small leaving a lot of space between the paragraphs.
I like your title as well as the use of the circles, I would say trying another font or changing the size as other people have commented.
Just as the others said, the circles are great. Its a nice blue which is very pleasing to the eye. And the transparency of the circles over the text is really nice also.
Interesting set up of your layout, the juxtaposition of the circles from largest to smallest on the left (and faded to allow the text to jump to the front), to the smallest to largest on the right. Good choice in color as I think it really works for this layout, one comment would be to keep the two blocks on the side (the black bars with the white text) the same color. Outside of that, this is a very successful layout!