I think your elevation is an awesome representation of what a diagram should be. The arrows help the image flow and the strokes capture the idea of levels quite excellently. I do think, however, that you could have easily shown traffic patters, in your floorplan. That would have been very interesting to see. Otherwise, great job!
I think your elevation is an awesome representation of what a diagram should be. The arrows help the image flow and the strokes capture the idea of levels quite excellently. I do think, however, that you could have easily shown traffic patters, in your floorplan. That would have been very interesting to see. Otherwise, great job!