Share this:FacebookTwitterEmailPinterestLinkedInWilliam Boland Exercise 115BExercise 217 – Diego Asencio Comments (4) sramer October 29, 2020 at 10:42 am Good job, I would suggest to lower the opacity on the first layout since all marks are pretty bold and dark. Lowering it would make the main lines of direction more clear. Silvia Hoessl November 8, 2020 at 12:26 pm Great Job on the Light flow Diagram, interesting building you chose. The walking path is a bit thick and bold, overall good job. Camryn November 13, 2020 at 11:44 pm Hello! I think both of your diagrams are very well done. I might suggest changing the color of the path on the first diagram, as it blends in with the floor plan. The second diagram is great, I love how you have the sunlight filling out the room, especially towards the bottom. zshujayee December 7, 2020 at 3:01 am This is really nice and intricate and your use of color does a great job to make the image more coherent Pingbacks list Join the discussion, leave a reply! Cancel comment Comment Name Email Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.