William Boland Exercise 116

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  1. Good job, I would suggest to lower the opacity on the first layout since all marks are pretty bold and dark. Lowering it would make the main lines of direction more clear.

  2. Hello! I think both of your diagrams are very well done. I might suggest changing the color of the path on the first diagram, as it blends in with the floor plan. The second diagram is great, I love how you have the sunlight filling out the room, especially towards the bottom.

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